If these elephants could talk in human words what do you think they’d be saying? “Hi there, want to go stare at the human zoo?”  Maybe the other would respond “Let’s go shoot water at them. It’s hot outside anyway.” Well that’s my brief thoughts about elephant talk. My thoughts about talking this week are all tied up in dialogue. I love it!

I’ve been told that I’m heavy on dialogue. Me and Elmore Leonard, right? 🙂 What’s not to like?

What do you like when you read a book? I’m passionate about dialogue though I am working hard to find a nice balance in my own work. I’ve recently discovered something about myself which I think is good. I write my first drafts almost completely in dialogue and then go back and layer in setting, the senses, etc.  Now I would think that this is not how most historical romance writers write. I imagine that most have a heavier hand on setting. That seems reasonable doesn’t it? We need to be immersed to some extent in where the writer is taking us so we can become grounded in the story.

I think dialogue can really make a story move. Think about a few lines or paragraphs of dialogue that kept you riveted in a book. Look for pages where there is a lot of dialogue. Do you like what the author did or would you have preferred more narrative or description? Maybe it’s just a matter of personal taste, maybe it’s more than that.